For many international students, learning how to write an English essay is essential to a successful college career in the US. There are many types of essays and, when it comes to essay writing, there is more than one way to share your ideas and communicate well.
Essay Writing Tips for International Students
No matter your major, writing essays is important to getting good grades – and good writing skills will help you succeed in any future internship or job. If you are an undergraduate student, you may also be completely new to writing academic essays for higher education.
Keep reading to learn how international students can get comfortable with essay writing, especially understanding an essay outline, thesis statement, and paragraph structure.
Create an Essay Outline
Working from an outline lets you plan the main points of your international student essay and put them in order. This makes it easier to stay organized once you start writing.
“I always require my students to work on an outline before they draft their essays,” says Maad El-Gali, ESL instructor at University of the Pacific. “Regardless of essay formats, an outline generally leads to successful writing because it allows students to picture what their essay will look like. [It also] allows me to give students feedback before they start [the essay writing process].”
El-Gali teaches his students that every essay outline must have four parts:
A thesis statement (also known as a central argument)
Major and minor supporting arguments
Once you have created an essay outline that has these four elements, you are ready to begin the academic essay writing process.
Understanding the Essay Prompt
The first step toward writing your international student essay is making sure you understand your essay prompt. An essay prompt is the subject or topic you need to write your essay on. This prompt you receive can be written in different formats, such as a statement, a question, or a set of data. The following is just one example of an essay prompt: “Reading more books improves your skill as a writer. Explore this statement.”
With the above example, your next step would be to break down this prompt and understand the different areas involved in the topic. Ask yourself questions about the prompt which help to define the topic in your essay, for example: How does reading books improve writing skills? Do certain books help improve writing more than others? Is this true for all kinds of writers and writing?
By asking yourself these types of questions, you can gain a better understanding of which components your essay should contain. As you usually have a limited amount of words and time to work with, it is important to plan out how you want to structure your essay to make it easy to read while still containing detailed information.
The introduction is the first paragraph of your international student essay and gives the reader a brief overview of the topic you are writing about. This is one of the most important elements of your essay, as many readers will use an introduction to get a first impression of your content.
Your introduction should immediately get the reader’s attention and encourage them to take an interest in what you have written. The essay introduction should contain a valuable or interesting piece of information to the reader, such as a statistic, an unexpected fact, a relatable scenario, or a compelling quote.
Additionally, the introduction should have a clear and brief outline of what is discussed in your essay, such as the sections to follow, questions to be answered, and even the intended audience.
Finally, the intro to academic essays typically has a clear thesis statement: a central argument that will be defended with supporting research in the pages to come.
How to Write a Strong Thesis
For a typical college essay or academic paper, the first part of writing a strong thesis is to present a clear thesis statement. This statement presents your argument to your reader and gives a glimpse into what you will cover over the course of the essay. With your thesis statement, explain how your argument joins the conversation of the overall topic it relates to, and how it contributes to this discussion.
Your thesis should be specific and focused. Avoid deviating too far from your central idea and make sure your supporting evidence is relevant and helps the reader understand your most important points. To better support your argument, your essay should go into deep detail and define what your argument is, the importance of your argument and why you are presenting it, and the approach you have taken to explain it.
A strong thesis is also unique, and your supporting points should emphasize your argument and its validity in larger discussions and contexts. Analyze your argument impartially by exploring multiple angles. By including counterarguments from different perspectives, you can highlight the depth of your research — and better make your case to your reader.
The body of your essay will have multiple sections that break down your central argument with supporting evidence. Your goal is to present your thesis and research in a way that is easy to understand, while also covering critical information.
Here is a good sample structure for the body of a college essay:
Begin with a definition—Explain your topic is and its most important aspects. Give your reader context and the basic knowledge they need to understand the more advanced information you will cover next.
Go into detail—As you dive deeper into your topic, describe its simpler components first and move on to more advanced sections as necessary. Make sure each section comes under its own heading and that paragraphs are short and easy to read.
Focus your content—Avoid generalized information and make sure all information is relevant. Focus only on one major concept in each paragraph. Your paragraphs should transition naturally and create a logical journey through your essay. This helps the reader understand your main points in a structured way.
Explain your point—After helping the reader learn more about the topic and giving clear context, you can start presenting your thesis statement. Your argument should tie in all the information you presented before and use it as a basis to explain the validity of your argument. Use references, data sources, examples, and other supporting evidence from reputable sources to emphasize your claims and add credibility.
Evaluate counter arguments—If relevant, present the positive and negative sides of the topic you are arguing. This shows you have conducted deep analysis and that you aim to avoid bias, which improves the authority of your essay. You can also use this section to emphasize why the positives of your argument outweigh the negatives.
Once you are satisfied with the content and structure of your body, it is time to end your essay with a conclusion.
The conclusion is the final segment of your international student essay and should wrap up your main points. This section should not introduce any new information, and should summarize what you have discussed while emphasizing the importance of your point or argument.
Your conclusion should connect back to your introduction and how the points you have discussed contribute toward your central argument. The challenge in this section is summarizing your most important points without sounding repetitive.
To present an effective conclusion, rather than repeating your introduction statement, try rephrasing it: Since your introduction or thesis statement presented the topic before the reader had context, your conclusion should now speak to the reader as one newly informed and familiar with your research and point of view.
Your conclusion should end with a positive note that promotes your central argument, provide your reader with a sense of closure, and present broader implications that encourage the reader to learn more, like a final suggestion, course of action, solution, or a question.
Revise Your First Draft
After completing the conclusion, the first draft of your international student essay is now complete! The first draft of your essay is the first version, and contains all your raw ideas and unedited writing. The next step of writing a good essay is to revise your draft to bring it closer to the final version.
Why should you revise your first draft? Think of it as a newly constructed house — with the overall structure completed, it is time for you to do a thorough inspection and spot possible faults or areas for improvements. This can take two or even three more draft revisions, but the most important part is to ensure your essay is improving in quality each time so you can put your best work forward.
During your revisions, you may notice your first draft is very long. As you write down your ideas and research findings, it is very easy to repeat information or get sidetracked into topics outside your focus. As you revise, read each segment carefully to spot any repeated information and excessively long paragraphs or sentences and shorten these as needed.
Remember also to look for areas where you may need to add more detail — a first draft is often written quickly as ideas come to your mind, and some sections could benefit from additional information or evidence you had not initially considered. At the same time, check that your sentences flow in a logical sequence and order: Read paragraphs out loud to see if they sound right to you — if they do not, readers will most likely notice this as well.
As you revise your first draft of your essay, keep the following tips in mind.
Do’s and Don’ts of Essay Writing
Don’t write more than you need to. Do make sure your words matter.
“Multilingual writers (aka international students) tend to be focused more on the quantity rather than the quality of writing,” says El-Gali at University of the Pacific. “They believe that writing more means having a higher grade on writing assignments, which is not necessarily true.” In fact, adding too many extra words can result in a paragraph structure that is difficult for the reader to follow.
Don’t forget about your reader. Do find clear, clever ways to make your point.
Keep your reader in mind as you write and try to make your writing interesting, engaging, and relatable. Remember: Different languages have different writing rules and phrases. While writing, be aware of your readers’ perspectives and always aim to communicate clearly so your words will be understood.
Don’t just run spell check. Do edit and proofread essays thoroughly.
“This is crucial so that the English-speaking reader will understand the writer’s intention,” El-Gali says.
If you want more advice on improving your writing or general writing tips, reach out to a Shorelight advisor! They are always ready to provide essay tips and academic support for international students, and can direct you to valuable resources such as an international student guidebook. They also provide dedicated international student services such as helping you improve your English skills, evaluate graduate programs, prepare for visa interviews, and much more.
Common Mistakes of a First Draft
Your first draft is the blueprint for your final essay and should be considered the first of several drafts. As a blueprint, your first draft should focus on including key information and building the overall structure of your final essay. Some students make the mistake of not revising and turning in their first draft as the final (which is often not their best work and can lead to a lower grade).
Here are common mistakes of a first draft to watch out for:
Focusing on grammar, style, vocabulary, or particular word choices—In the first draft, ideas come first. (You can worry about style in a later draft!) Your main priority is to ensure all the critical points of your argument are covered.
Adding too many details—Adding too much detail to each of your points in your first draft can make it difficult to effectively structure the essay’s overall flow. Your first draft only needs the most important points determined and mapped out.
Starting late—The earlier you start, the better! You want plenty of time to research, write, and revise. If you are forced to rush, the quality of your essay may not be as high compared to starting early and being able to take your time.
Editing while writing—Since you will likely go through several drafts before your final essay, it is not important to edit your spelling and sentence structure in these initial stages. You may even replace certain sections as you revise, which makes editing early unnecessary.
Once you have written a well-structured first draft as a guide, you can proceed to your next draft. Refine your research and supporting details, while also addressing grammar and style, as you work toward your final draft.
How to Write a Final Draft Essay
Your final draft is the product of all your revisions so far, and at this stage, your essay should be polished into its best version, ready to be turned in to your professor. In contrast to the first draft, your final draft requires a lot of time and close attention to detail.
Here is a helpful approach for the final draft of your essay:
Use your second draft to flesh out key information points and add more supporting details. Follow the structure you established in your first draft.
Begin editing your essay in your third draft. Closely read through your entire essay to find spelling or grammatical issues to correct and places where you can clarify your language. While spell-check can help significantly, it is not foolproof: Try reading your essay aloud to find any sentences spell-check may have missed.
In later drafts, check that your essay format conforms to your program’s requirements and standards. This includes checking your document’s margins, heading structure, citation style, and other specific areas your professor has requested. (If you’re not sure, this is typically covered in your syllabus.)
Even if you are satisfied with the condition of your essay, one last revision is always a good idea before you turn in your final draft.
Revise to Improve the Structure of Your Essay
Your last revision results in the final version of your essay, so it is important to dedicate as much time and attention as your previous steps. As you read through each section, you may find some areas could be improved with changes, and making these revisions will result in a better-quality essay.
Evaluate that every section is relevant to your central argument. If some seem unnecessary or unrelated to your most important points, consider removing or relocating these areas to improve the essay’s focus. Try different combinations based on what makes the most logical sense for your topic.
At this stage, you should also look at sentence structure and flow to determine if the essay reads clearly. Your essay structure should maintain a logical flow from one section to the next. If you feel that certain sections lack an effective introduction or are missing context, revise so it’s understandable to the reader.
A great way to approach essay revisions is to view it with the perspective of a new reader. You can also ask friends and family to read your essay and offer feedback – this can help you catch issues that you may not have noticed on your own.
Essay Writing Help
For many international students, college-level essay writing is a new skill. If you have outlined, written, and edited your essay and are still not sure whether it is ready to turn in, do not be afraid to ask for help.
ESL students can get assistance with how to write an essay and receive general writing tips from a writing coach at the writing center on campus, or check with your Shorelight academic advisor to find relevant resources and support services.
Remember, the more college-level essays you write, the more familiar and comfortable you will be with the essay writing process.
Follow these essay writing steps to develop strong writing skills. Keep up the good work!
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